Novel Master of Lords

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    Hello i am posting a translation and a remake of my book called "Master of Lords"

    Synopsis:
    It is a story about a kid who becomes the villain because of the other side called themself "heroes.". Death is nothing. Soul is eternal. Humanity will won the war once again!

    Genre:
    Fantasy, magic, war, revenge, a little love.

    Table of contents
    Entrance and some notes + Episode 0
    Episode 1
     
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    Entrance And Some Notes

    This book you are reading has no connection to real people, religion. It is all my imagination. Also this is a translate from its original language from the same author, me.

    “I put what is on my mind at the moment into my book. To avoid it becoming a soulless i add from my soul. This is how i will write a success!”

    -me


    Ep 0 - Darkness

    Light... he saw a light before he perished. Was it death or just the door to that realm? Door... it is all chained up! What was that white chain? Light? Every time he looked at it chain tried to stretch harder. But it could not, because it was infinite. Chain kept coming all sides behind from the door. Fred couldn’t break it, He knows that he is not have the strength. Fred changed the direction he was looking and he sawed his situation. This place is hell, one of three places before time. Fred heard a sound. He couldn’t look anymore even thorough he wanted. He already saw everything. He closed his eyes and refused to believe. He had his house in his mind. It was all junk but it was his home in the end. He remembered the river near his house. River... river... he couldn’t keep the river’s noise in his head. He forgoted the river. At that time river dried up. Fred stopped thinking and his junk house gone dark and turned into dust. River water that lasted turned into sand. The dust, sand and the ground his feet used to step all turned to darkness in an instant! Now everything was just black. Was that happened just because he didn't keep in his head? Why did he stopped? Sounds started again, Fred didn't thought he could ignore it for the second time? He tried, he failed. And he looked at the sounds. Chains! Chains were breaking! It was impossible to stretch! It was loosing its divine brightness. How? It was darkness. The reason light breaks because of darkness. The thing weakening him and causing death was darkness.

    Actualy there where nothing. Fred were looking but he couldn't put it together. Darkness was just nothing? İs that true? Chains broke up. Light was defeated by nothing is that correct? So it wasn’t that strong. Screams heard from distance. It wasn't the normal kind, it sounded innocent. Fred did heard those screams, he did not gave any value to it. Screams were nothing to him just like darkness. Nothing. What a pitiful undeveloped existence, it looks but cannot see, it hears but doesn't care. How could it deserved to be named? Fred walked through the door. The whole hell disappeared for Fred before it felt the Fred.

    Because Fred is not the main character. He is a fool that just ignored the tragedy unlike a main character. He did not take what fate gave him. Fred does not care what lifted him up. He went the quick route. Thats why he is rejected from higher beings. Fred is rejected. Thats why he joined into true nothingness.


    This story is a tale called “Death of Fred”. it is a bed story for newer generations. People think this story as a insane darkness fanatics fantasy, but it has a morale that tells kids not to be ignorant. Only gods knows if it is true. Maybe because 5 of them uses light as a tool and a story of light being defeated is not a good look. Thats why for the last few hundred years a question echoes. Can darkness beat light? This is a story from our main character that born from darkness. This is the story of Dreemur. Dreemur will not be rejected.
     
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    Ep1- Some Shadows And Birth

    Queen was suffering. The pain that comes from imitating gods. King was waiting outside of the room, sweating cold. Queens old friend miss Lamor and the royal maid Victoria were talking.

    “Queen did not scream this much while Miss Lusi’s birth” Said miss Lamor

    “It is natural. The kid that is coming is a double hybrid. It would be surprising if it didn’t.”

    “Does Queen really want this birth? It is a taboo in the end.” Victoria’s eyes got redder, wider.

    “Are you questioning your Queens choices?” King was listening to this talk quietly. Maybe he just wondered were this will lead to? Even he was not sure if kid should born or not.

    Miss Lamor panicked. “OFCOURSE NOT! İ never think that!” Red heat in miss Victoria’s eyes cooled. “I hope.” King breathed in an out. He looked like he is thinking. Probably thinking the future. Even though he does not like it this is his behavior that he can’t change, it even affected his fight style. He was calling this calling the futures. Saw all possibility and think all acts on it. Which possibility he is thinking right now? For sure it is about his kids being, life or death. Both of the outcomes are not quite sweet for his people. If the kid dies, the prince is death. If the kid lives, a nature’s freak is prince now. Human, angel and demon, 3 races double hybrid as Lamor said. This is not important just for the Redhood too. It is also important all over allies of the clan. It is that important the royalty who does not get up from his throne are here; Deathris, the queen of Pinkblade and the king of Purpleskull, Purbe. King didn't like both of them very much but he understand the reason behind. He tried a small talk to cloud his mind from the events.

    “How is your wife mister Purbe?” Queen Nightlight, Purbe’s wife is usually close to King’s wife who is giving birth right now, miss Lusi, the Queen of Redhood. But she could not leave to see her friends birth because of almost same reasons, she were also bearing a child. Purbe is... kind of a loner and does not like people himself. Actually he almost doesn’t speak to anyone apart his wife. He wasn’t royalty. He was son of a farmer who hated royalty. It is a mystery to know what Nightlight finds in him. He answered with an annoyed voice.

    “In the castle. Not your business.” King of Redhood guessed this part so he didn't answered back. Then he rotated his head to Deathris’s side. She answered with a “hmph.” by looking some other way. This is not a royal person would do but she thought she had a good reason. She was an ex lover to Luk. And she is still mad after several years. She tried to make him jealous by marrying first royalty she find and send a invite that was eye blinding. Luk did come to the wedding and even done a talk like nothing ever happened between them. She would strangle him if she wasn’t the bride, it was obvious.

    Luk didn’t tell anything and looked in front of him. There is no use to ignore his stress. And then quietness hit. King couldn’t take anymore and barge into the room. He frozen in his place. His eyes got tears. He felt weird like he never felt before. Liz was on the bed and in her arms a beautiful baby. King cryed maybe the first time for real. Tears of happiness felled from his cheek. He got near queen passing through midwifes. Young was silent with his eyes closed. Since his mother was an half angel her powers calmed the kid. His little hairy head showed a black color. His skin was pale white. Deatris seemed jealous from distance but she did showed some love like an aunt. But what was important was his eyes... Blue like his mother or red like his father. Kid opened his eyes.

    ...

    King got confused... Deatris and Purbe too... is this... what he think it is? Redhood flag has a image of a person wearing Redhood with a blind left eye. The ones who built Redhood said “Person born with these features is the one who will take the next step on Redhood. He will be the most important of us” it was a prophecy... Little kid had Red eye on his right eye as usual and... yes there is no misunderstanding, that is a blind eye on his left. King grabbed his kid and went to balcony. Crowd was waiting the news. King has no choice in this as the prophecy called his name is already chosen. “MY SON, REDHOOD’S NEW PRİNCE HAVE THE NAME THAT İS DREEMUR REDHOOD”

    The people couldn’t believe their ears. Was legend fulfilled? By a double hybrid none the less!

    Little moment after door slammed open. The one who enter was Queen’s daughter Lusi. Lusi were that much did not care about his siblings birth wasn’t either bothered to enter the room. But cry from her stepdad gained her interest.

    Lusi was not even smiling since her mother’s second marriage. Her mother was Lightners clan’s head family, well at least before she escaped from there and married with Redhood king Luk. Lusi followed her since she thought had nowhere else to go. Actually all of the Lightners was ready to have her with open arms, in order to have her genes of course. Since she is member of head family her blood contains the best of the best genes of Lightners possess.

    Lusi wanted her brother to her arms to confirm with her own eyes. She hold Dreemur with care and delicacy and look through his eyes. Dreemur did the same look right back at her. He must liked the color blue in her eyes since he didn’t move an inch. Lusi did not affected by cuteness and continued to look. Dreemur tried to grab her by holding his hands to her face. He managed to grab her hair and pulled. His sister let her mother hold him and left the room without a single change in her face.

    Every place around the clan had their celebrations. Poems written and read around the streets, gifts has given to royals, food has been given away. After all the fun King took his wife, kids and the head maid Victoria and left for a vacation in a mansion near fire kingdom. It is a tradition to left until the kid grows to be 5 years old.

    Two royal coach and four royal guard coach convoy was going through the stone way. Red painting and flags around the couch was giving away it was containing the royalty. One in the front had maid Victoria and her husband Drak with a lot of luggage on top of it. The one in the back had the royal family, King Luk, Queen Liz, Princess Lusi and one week old

    Dreemur.

    Drak was complaining about being stuck on the coach that has the baggages to his wife. “I tell you they think we are baggages too! They see us as an item love. They obviously can afford a third cart can’t they?” Victoria was used to these kind of talk. Victoria knew he only cared about her well being so usually she did not get angry. But speaking the truth does not count as being angry to her. “If i didn’t tell them you could carry those baggages you couldn’t be here love.” Drak stuttered and shut up against her words. He maybe husband of head maid but he wasn’t the brightest. No one in the castle knew for sure why Victoria married with him, except Victoria. It was love. Like all the other stupid occurrences love is the answer. They first meet in front of the bar. He had gambled with the money he did not have and beaten after his incompetence. At that time Victoria was daughter of the old head maid. She was doing royal stock up business when she saw this pitiful man. While she was just passing with a look it hit her. “what are these villagers thinking?” Victoria may be smart but she had no empathy. She get close to Drak and talk with him. “How did you manage getting beated in a friendly bar like this? People wouldn't beat anyone unless you steal something... are you a thief?” “Wha- No! I'm no thief! I just... i... played with no coin...” Victoria was trying to not look at blood dripping from his nose. “How much you owe?” Drak blushed and looked the other way. “pair of... gold...” When he turned back girl was disapeared. While he was looking left and right bar’s doors opened. He was waiting the owner come and beat him up she came back from it. “I paid your debt. You owe me a favor in back now.” Drak was stunned. “Wha- Whe- What?” “I am your friend. From now on we hang out together.” He accepted it... he did not had a choice but he would chose the same anyways. After that day they hangout together, date, marry. Victoria was happy to live with a guy she spend more than half of her life with but Drak always the best at hiding his happiness and be the douche with the uncomfort.

    In the back coach Liz was holding her son and not being able to look anywhere. Lusi where sitting in front of her but trying to not be here mentally. She was looking behind the tight curtains. And Luk was, smiling. He was looking warmer since Dreemur born. Liz said “Whats with the smile?” Luk laughed a little. “How can you tell without looking?” “I am the one who can tell everything about you.” “Fine i am smirking. Human is inside of me.” Lusi was so unconvinced she looked away from outside for a second. Liz catched her looking inside and took the opportunity. “Why don’t you hold him a little?” Lusi was ignorant “Why bother? I'm just his sibling he would not care about me the second he grows.” Liz got harder on her. “Miss Lusi Lightners i request that you care more about your brother.” She just looked at her. “NOW!” Lusi couldn’t argue more.

    Her mother was Liz Lightners. Daughter of one of the most high status families of Lightners. Well, until she married with her nemesis clans king Luk. The first time they saw each other it was a live or die duel. Liz was strong at using the blade but she was suppressed so much she was nothing against a man who used to kill angels. After she still manage to put a fight but she lost in the end. Luk was ready to execute her. Just before he cut her neck she spoke “I wish i was on your side.” Luk stopped. “What is this? Are you begging for mercy?” “No... i dont.” “Then keep going, what was that?” “At least you guys have the freedom.” “You... can be free. You do have a choice.” “No i dont. If you do not kill me i will become a slave for making new soldiers.” Luk lowered his guard. “Do you even want to kill me?” “No” Luk sighed. He hated Lightners once more. Then he gave his hand to her and made an offer. “Come with me.” Liz’s eyes flashed with a little lefted hope. “What will happen to you then?” Time for Liz to question. “It should be fine. I'm not doing anything against the 9 rules.” “What about your people? They wouldn’t like this.” Luk was thinking, he looked at the corridor he fight just a moment ago. It was truly a last push to survive for her. He could not let go her, his honor will not let it. He was giving excuses for himself but when he was the one who knows it was excuse it did not work. He sighed again “It does not matter if they don’t like it. I am their king in the end.” “What will you tell them? They won’t trust you if you don’t have a reason.” Luk looked at Liz. She was in her white uniform. Her hair was black and reflective. Her skin was pale but she had bruises everywhere. Her eyes where blue. She had a good physic. Luk realized he was looking for too long. He blushed a little. Then he said with a weird smirk. “I... i will tell them i found my love.” Liz had to take a few seconds to compare. She looked at him like a male for the first... he was handsome for a standart. She was comforted by looking at him. Her deceased ex husband never could have make her feel these feelings she was feeling right now. Luk kneeled. He opened his knife repair kit and pulled out a random little bolt just the size of a ring. He holded the bolt against her. “Will you marry me... Liz was it?” after he said that he felt little more stupid. Liz asked. “My daughter... she would be left alone.” “I promise she will be safe as long as she is with us. I will put my life on the line for both of you.” Liz accepted it. They ran to Redhood. They married a few weeks later. People was not pleased but didn’t car that much. The reason behind this king is chosen by strength, not blood. So they thought since a double hybrid would be too weak to be next king. But look at what happened!

    Lusi held her brother like a basket. She didn’t even bother to look at his face. Then she felt a little pain in her hair. Dreemur had grabbed a handful of hair of his sister. He was pulling her hair like he was wanting attention. Lusi didn’t liked that her hair get messed up. She get her brother closer to her and hold him with one hand. She tried to let him go but it didn’t work with her trying to not hurt the baby and her hair. “Let it go!” Dreemur just looked at her and as an answer he made some baby noises. Finally he let her hair go. When she just relaxed he put his tiny hand against Lusi’s face. Lusi defeated. She started petting his head so he be quiet. After a while Dreemur yawned and then fall asleep. He seemed happy. Lusi did not realized that she had the same emotion too. When she looked up she noticed her parents where watching her with glaring eyes. “What? Human is inside of me.” a little chuckle could be heard from her mother.

    Coach slowed down and stop. After that a guard opened the door. “Your Highness we-” “SHH! Be quiet!” Lusi cut his words. Guard panicked for a second. Then he got close to the king and whispered. “We arrived your highness...”

    One by one they did get down from the coach. Lusi was still holding Dreemur. When she did look up to see the mansion she surprised. She was expecting something like red glass, black wood, dark mood. Just like other buildings in the capital. Instead of that she was looking at a building that is... felt warm. It was prety huge. It was made out of ashed woods that painted to brown. Glass of the house was blue. Around of the house was covered with fire trees that had orange and red leaves even tho it was summer. It looked nothing like a demon building. Luk got near her. He didn’t wait for her to ask. “This buildings purpose is for child mentality. Not for demons to live efficient lives. Also no visitors come here so it doesn't need to look like royalty.” “What about security? All around is covered with woods... i can’t see the end of it.” “Fire kingdom likes us, they are paying for everything including security. Around the woods there are fire orbs, they are invisible. If they sence a bad intent they explode with more than 200 celcius. Trees are ashen wood so they dont burn. “What if they have fire resistance?” “After exploding special guards would come with urgent. Also there is a barrier around the forest excluding only us and some critters.” Lusi felt satisfied. She checked her brother to see him awake. He looked annoyed. Lusi looked around to see the cause. It was of course Drak hauling some bags. And of course he was complaining with grunts caused by lifting heavy bags that he couldn’t handle. Nothing to do here. If they told him to stop now he would complain about you telling him what to do. It will be a great 5 year.
     
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